this is the first time i have done a group critic and i found it very helpful for me because i can see other peoples perspectives on how my work is with people commenting what i wrote is good what can get left out and what can be added to make the essay better. I also saw how others wrote their narratives and i could use their advice to build up my writing.
I learned from the group season the i need to make the story flow better. i found this very helpful for the future.