I haven't participated in group activities such as this before. I have done something similar such as what we did at the beginning of class today rather than having to read it with everyone else and get feedback there and then. This experience helped me because I was able to get more ideas from everyone else of what else I could add, such as more stories or being more personal. In my revision i'll be sure to be more personal and not be afraid to as many of my classmates were.